Notes from Liam’s Lair
Ever Wonder Why They are Called “Beta” Readers?
Beta is the Second Letter in the Greek alphabet
What Happened to “Alpha” Readers?
Good Question - Glad You Asked
Google Defines an Alpha Reader as:
What are Alpha Readers?
Readers Who Look at Your Writing Before It's Polished
Beta Readers Commonly Look at a Polished Work
Alpha Readers Look at a Rough Draft
Alphas Help You Find the Holes and Disjointed Edges
They should Not be Looking at Sentence Structure or Commas
They Should be Looking at the Big Picture
What is the Big Picture?
What’s Working? What Feels Weak?
What May Make Sense in your Head but Doesn’t Translate to the Page
Alphas Help You Find the Major Points to Strengthen
or - Weak Points that May not Need to Be There
Alpha Readers – as Defined by Google - have Largely Disappeared from the Writing Landscape
Their Use has been Displaced by Beta Readers
For a Good Reason – Betas have Begun to be Used Today
To Review a Finished Manuscript
Why Take an Extra Month’s Delay (minimum) Getting to a Beta Reader
for “Essentially” the Same Final Product
So Alpha Reader Use is Essentially Extinct
Does that make Sense?
What have We Lost?
We have Lost Someone to Evaluate the Big Picture in a Timely Manner
What is Timely: the First 3-25 Pages
Look at the Issue from a Different Perspective
Agents Wanting a Sample of Your Manuscript Ask for a
Min of 5 to a Max of 50 pages
Why?
Agents can Receive 100 Submissions a Day
Their First Task is to Eliminate the Obvious Failures
For That They Need at Most Five Pages
A Successful Published Author can Get Away with Murder in Their Subsequent Manuscripts
A First-Time Writer Can’t
If the Writer Hasn’t Covered the
Accepted Minimum Requirements in the First Five Pages
Their Manuscript is Rejected
The Remainder of the Fifty Pages only Confirm if Your Work has
Promise to Make a Profit
AND
The Agent has the Expertise Themselves to Know
and the Publisher Contacts
for your genre
Who Tell the Agent What They Want
With that in Mind … Remember
Beta Readers Need to have Expertise in Writing – Most are Authors
Alpha Readers Don’t – often They are Readers Only
They Need to Give Feedback from the Perspective of a Reader
When can They Provide the Best Service for an Author’s Needs?
First – and Most Productively
By Feedback that Mirrors what the Agent Sees
The First 25 to 50 Pages of a Manuscript
Before You Waste Time Writing a Completed, Edited Manuscript
Which would Only be Rejected Later
Second
By Reading the Completed Second Draft Copy
After You have Completed Your First Revision
You Want a Reader – Any Reader – to be an Alpha Reader
A Relative or Friend is Perfect
Not Necessarily a Writer – Save Them for Beta Reading
The Alpha Review Comes in Two Stages
Just like a Prospective Agent’s Review
The First is a Questionnaire for the First Five Pages Only
It Addresses the Requirements that Must be in a Properly Constructed Beginning
If Your Reader(s) doesn’t get All Answers Correct
You would be Dead at an Agent Review
You Need to Rewrite Now
The Second is to Double-Space the Manuscript Sample
Min 25 Pages to Max 50
Ask Them to Note Anywhere the Story Drags
Anywhere it doesn’t Make Sense
Whatever
Only Now can You Adequately Assess if You can Continue as Before
Or Go Back to the Drawing Board
That is an Alpha Review