Troy Lambert
Defining the Muddle in the Middle
Act 2 – Part 2 An Overview
Midpoint – An Inflection Point in the Story’s Middle, Like a Second Inciting Incident
Plot Point 2 – A Change in the Stories Direction Cause by an Action the Protagonist Takes
The Muddle in the Middle – The Difficulty of Transitioning the Story through the Midpoint
What is the Midpoint?
The Midpoint is What Happens in the Middle of the Story
The Midpoint Contains a Major Confrontation in the Story
It Reestablishes the Protagonist’s Main Goal, Restated the Theme of the Story, and
Raises the Stakes
Midpoint Essentials
Allow the Protagonist to Reach their Goal, Only to Have Success Stripped Away
Reset the Protagonist’s Perspective
Remind the Reader of the Central Theme or Question
Setback the Protagonist and Refocus Them on Their Goal, Thereby Raising the Stakes
What’s the Point of the Midpoint?
The Protagonist a Goal at the Midpoint
The Goal can Be a False One: What They Want, not What They Need
The Protagonist May Think They Have Achieved They Goal – and be Wrong
The Goal Can be the Protagonist’s “False Horizon,” Revealing an Additional Goal
that Must Be Met
A Victory for the Antagonist
The Midpoint is a Dramatic Loss for the Protagonist
This is the Loss of the Battle, not the War
The Protagonist Learns a Lesson from the Loss
The Setting and the Midpoint
Interesting Places can Create Additional Hardship for Our Hero and Contribute to Their Loss
Interesting Places Benefit Our Antagonist (for Now) and Can Appear to
Assure Their Ultimate Victory
Addition
The Original Die Hard Movie
Example: The Lion King
After Years of Escaping His Pain by Living a “Hakuna Matata” Lifestyle, Simba Finds Himself Still Haunted by His Past
Rafiki Divines that Simba is Alive and Finds Him
Example: Hunger Games
Katniss Allies with Rue to Find a Way to Even the Odds Between Them and the Rest of the Tribunes
The Pair Decides to Destroy the Stockpile of Supplies Near the Cornucopia
All of These are Dramatic Events
Like the Inciting Incident, the Midpoint Signals a Change in Direction
The Dramatic Event of the Midpoint Must be “Interesting”
The Midpoint Must Cause the Protagonist to Reset Their Thinking
Warning: The Midpoint is Hard to Write
Defining the Muddle in the Middle
The Middle is Muddled when the Story Slows for the Author and Reader
The Muddled Middle Lack a Dramatic Event, a Change in Perspective,
or a Restatement of the Theme
The Muddle Usually Comes from Telling, not Showing